My Sun and Stars by LE Bryce

[Review by Annie Dean]

Grade: B

First, let me just say, when I saw the cover, I was like, are they kidding? In a book with manlove, they put a giant towering phallus on it? Also I think it doesn’t evoke the setting very well. When I saw the cover, I thought My Sun and Stars would be about two knights getting it on in medieval times. It’s definitely not. But on to the meat of the story.

Sephil is a special kind of prince, and by which I mean, he likes to invite a bunch of catamites back to his palacial pad and have wild monkey sex from dusk til dawn. His family has washed their hands of him, so he has this “woe is me, poor little rich boy” thing down pat. Well, he’s bored and lonely with his life so he decides to replace his personal guard. He likes his men big, rough and mean, you see, plus the guards always put up such an interesting fight before succumbing to his boy-whore wiles.

That’s how Adeja gets his new job. Mind you, he’s told it’s a promotion, but he’s wondering why all his guard-buddies are snickering behind their hands. They know he’s off to serve the cake-boy prince and the last sad bastard who had this job got shipped off to the frontier, guarding a dangerous border. Being Prince Sephil’s bodyguard sucks. Often literally.

At first, Sephil doesn’t make any headway with Adeja, who really is a rough tough bastard. He’ll fuck anything with a hole and isn’t too nice with his manners either. He tells Sephil exactly what he thinks of him for trying to jerk him around (and off) like that. As it turns out, this is just what Sephil needs because in the beginning of the book, he’s such a spoiled little bitch that they would’ve pulled out his hair on Queer Eye. Somehow, he also manages to be pathetic at the same time. I spent the first part of the book wishing Sephil would man up (even if he likes other men, or maybe because he does) and wondering how Adeja could keep from killing him. But Adeja possesses one personal trait that just won’t do; even if he thinks Sephil a rotten little prick, Adeja is loyal to the prince.

So of course, an evil scheming eunuch (is there any other kind?) gets poor Adeja sent off to the frontier like his predecessor, just when Sephil is starting to show signs that he might not be a complete waste of space. Life gets pretty tough for soldier boy from that point, and it’s no walk in the park for Sephil either. Of course, he brought a lot of that on himself because he cut his wrists when his beloved guard was torn from him. He didn’t want to marry the princess! Boohoo. The Turyans (who I imagine being like the Mongol horde) sack the frontier outpost where Adeja was sent, and being no fool, our guard heads for the hills. The Turyans sweep all the way to the city, which I take to be the capital. Sephil’s stupidly heroic brother marches out to meet them and gets carried back to the city beheaded and tied to a pole, which just goes to prove it’s better to be the gay younger brother, because he’s recuperating at a monastery (where better for lots of manlove, huh?)

Events became a little confusing at this point, and the names are a bit similar sometimes (Meden and Bedren). I didn’t quite understand why they were sticking their neck out to help Adeja, but nonetheless he winds up directed to the monastery, where he hooks up with Sephil once more. By this point, Sephil starts to show some interesting character growth, and the novel really came to life for me.

Where L.E. Bryce excels is the atmosphere and worldbuilding. I came into this expecting a m/m romance, but this book was far more than that. It just took the author a little while to work up to it. Yes, this is a fantasy novel that contains m/m sexual interaction, but more importantly, it’s beautifully written and evokes the quasi-middle eastern setting with surety and grace. The last half of the book influenced my grade substantially because the story comes into its own and the character growth is fabulous.

Sephil finally does man up, you’ll be glad to know. I’m not going to spoil the ending, which struck me as fitting and bittersweet, so if you like well-written fantasy with rich sense of intrigue and political skullduggery, you’ll want to check out My Sun and Stars.

If you’re interested in purchasing this title, it is available at Phaze (probably soon).

7 Responses to “My Sun and Stars by LE Bryce”

  1. shuzluva
    1

    I spent the first part of the book wishing Sephil would man up (even if he likes other men, or maybe because he does) and wondering how Adeja could keep from killing him.

    It sounds like Sephil is the typical romance heroine…spoiled, whiny and annoying. Except with a dick. It’s clear that what kept you involved was the plot and the setting. Bryce’s worldbuilding sounds fascinating. I may have to check this out just for that. Thanks Annie!

  2. Annie Dean
    2

    Yep, that’s dead on. If I had graded the book on the first half I would’ve been more likely to give a C or D because Sephil was just so tiresome. (Typical romance heroine.) But everything changed when they hit the monastery, and while I was braced for the story to take a cheesy turn, the author just kept surprising me by upping her game. I was impressed.

  3. Wylie
    3

    Congrats on the B, LE Bryce!! I look forward to reading it!

  4. L.E. Bryce
    4

    Whoa, Bam! That was fast! And exactly what I thought you’d write. Yes, Sephil is a whiny little shit in the first half, which is why I added his POV before subbing it, to make him just a little bit more sympathetic than he originally was, and to make his growth later a lot more believable.

    I think you’ll be pleased to know that I’m already 40,000 words into the sequel, which is set 18 years later and has Sephil’s son as its hero, kicking ass, taking a Turya warrior as his lover and foiling half a dozen plots to kill him before he can reclaim his father’s throne. Sephil is also present, there to smack Adeja upside the head when the latter is badly injured and goes through a mid-life crisis.

    Annie, I’m baffled. The book isn’t even out yet.

  5. L.E. Bryce
    5

    Edit: Wait, oh stupid me. Annie is our guest reviewer. face–>palm

    Bam, have you inflicted Dead to the World on her yet?

    I had such trouble with the cover. I didn’t know what to do, and neither did the editor, who was doing cover art duty at the time. I have no sense of design, really.

  6. Ann(ie)
    6

    Yeah, I’m helping her out with ebooks once a week. Less if people find my shit too boring. I had started a thing called Ebook Thursday on my own blog, but then I started chatting with Bam and offered to help her out with her ebook submissions.

    A Turyan, huh? I’m interested in that. Was I right? Were they like the Mongol Horde?

  7. L.E. Bryce
    7

    The Turyar (adj. Turya) are the Mongols/Hittites rolled into one, except they’re blond-haired and blue-eyed. They feature prominently in the sequel, in which Prince Zhanil Sephides strikes up an intensely homoerotic friendship with a secretly gay Turya warrior named Kalmeki.

    Yeah, Adeja is a bastard, but I like him, and he does have a gentle and ethical side to him. Sephil’s brother helps him out because he doesn’t approve of the raw deal Adeja has gotten; he also cares enough about his younger brother to know that Adeja is good for Sephil.

    The review was so good I thought Bam had written it. If you want whiny heroes, have Bam inflict the mega-novel Dead to the World on you. Of course, the hero in that one is a captured prince-turned-sex slave who’s really just trying to keep his shit together and survive.



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